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Hi Miz,

this is absolutely brilliant. I’ve been thinking about this exchange between Harbinger and Myrrhia, and it’s fascinating how you balanced the absurdity with the underlying tension. I love how Myrrhia is caught between laughing at his antics and that sobering realization that he is genuinely dangerous—it makes the reader feel just as off-balance as she is.

What really struck me was the 'We need to talk' motif.

It’s so simple, yet in your hands, it becomes this unsettling psychological hook. Seeing Harbinger jump from a playful, upside-down trickster to someone who wants to talk about 'us' in such a lascivious way is a masterclass in shifting character dynamics. It’s that exact moment where the fun stops and the real weight of the situation hits. I'm really curious about where this relationship goes—or more importantly, why Myrrhia regrets it afterwards.

You’ve really nailed that 'don't trust the monster even if he's funny' vibe!

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